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The Greatest Maze

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The greatest maze
I ever walked,
was the one
without
walls.
Just a random form of syllables, descending (4)(4)(3)(2)(1)
Randomly inspired by Lissomer and her much longer piece 
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Louis-Desormeaux's avatar
I too have written a similar piece descending in syllables. Sadly it is in a collection of poetry that I haven't posted here. I'm not sure it is as good as this one though. This poem has a good philosophical concept and is a successful experiment in my opinion. :thumbsup: 
I can see a possible collection.